After taking a day-long course on Reading Alice Munro at Grub Street in February, I decided to try my hand at tearing apart my favorite Munro story among those we had to read for the course. Here is what I came up with – let me know what you think! The Beggar Maid can be found in “Selected Stories: 1968-94”, available in paperback, among other Munro anthologies.
The story is told from Rose’s perspective in the 3rd person point of view and has 13 sections. (Sections refer to groups of paragraphs separated by blank lines.) Each of the sections is numbered below. Munro’s first sentence for each section is provided in italicized bold.
(1) “Patrick Blatchford was in love with Rose.” Introduction of the central relationship of the story, between Rose and Patrick, and the key features of that relationship: Rose’s surprise that Patrick loves him (element of tension there: why is she so surprised?), Patrick a graduate student with plans to become a historian professor, a bit older than Rose, difference in social circles/upbringing. Tension introduced by reaction of the elderly lady Dr. Henshawe, with whom Rose lives: “Oh, dear, I’m afraid he is after the wrong girl.” Section ends with a hint of darkness in Patrick’s personality. “But he was also full of cruel judgments, he was full of conceit.”
(2) “You are a scholar, Rose,” Dr. Henshawe would say. Rose at Dr. Henshawe’s house and then later talking to Flo (her stepmother) at home. Quick conversation with Patrick, who appears to have no idea that working-class people do not have an estate, money, stocks. Clearer element of tension related to social class between well-off Patrick and working-class Rose.
(3) And sometimes Dr. Henshawe would say, “Well, you are a scholar, you are not interested in that.” Short paragraph about Dr. Henshawe being a feminist who wants Rose to have high aspirations for herself and tries to open doors for her career-wise that Rose doesn’t really want to be opened.
(4) She had got to live with Dr. Henshawe by accident. First long scene of the story.
(5) She got a job working in the library of the college, instead of in the cafeteria. A man grabs Rose’s leg while she is working in the library, in a job she got thanks to Dr. Henshawe. Rose tells a young man what happened. This happens to be Patrick. This section also contains the key to the story’s title: Patrick says that Rose is like the Beggar Maid in the painting King Cophetua and the Beggar Maid. Further hints at Patrick’s rather pretentious attitude when others don’t know things he knows and thinks they should know. Patrick is called “the heir of a mercantile empire” by Dr. Henshawe, although she exaggerates a bit. Tension here comes from Rose’s reaction to Patrick’s love: “It was what she had dreamed of; it was not what she wanted.” Shocking, provocative, out-of-character behavior of Rose in front of Dr. Henshawe’s door.
(6) “Do you love him, Rose?” said Dr. Henshawe. Short section about Rose in her bedroom, writing the beginning of a poem.
(7) Patrick shared an apartment with two other graduate students. Rose and Patrick have sex at Patrick’s apartment. Discussion of the relationship at the middle point of the story. (“Why should she doubt so much, she thought, lying comfortably in the bed while Patrick went to make some instant coffee,” “Patrick loved her. What did he love? Not her accent, which he was trying hard to alter, though she was often mutinous and unreasonable, declaring in the face of all evidence that she did not have a country accent, everybody talked the way she did.”) Trip to see Patrick’s family.
(8) She took him to Hanratty. Visit to Rose’s family. (“It was just as bad as she had thought it would be.”
(9) Patrick gave her a diamond ring and announced that he was giving up being a historian for her sake. Engagement. Patrick decides to drop plans to become a historian and go into his father’s business for Rose’s sake, although she hasn’t asked him to.
(10) She woke up early, got up and dressed, and let herself out the side door of Dr. Henshawe’s garage. Rose goes to see Patrick. She has realized she does not want to marry him, but does not say so directly. First break up.
(11) Patrick wrote her a note: I don’t understand what happened the other day and I want to talk to you about it. But I think we should wait for two weeks and not see or talk to each other and find out how we feel at the end of that time. Section leads to the moment where she caves in against her best instincts and tells Patrick she loves him after all.
(12) When Rose afterward reviewed and talked about this moment in her life – for she went through a period, like most people nowadays, of talking freely about her most private decisions, to friends and lovers and party acquaintances whom she might never see again, while they did the same – she said that comradely compassion had overcome her, she was not proof against the sight of a bare bent neck. Glimpses of their future vaguely unhappy life together with Rose’s outbursts and Rose’s misguided pursuit of a vision of happiness through Patrick.
(13) She knew that was how she had seen him; she knows it, because it happened again. At the airport many years later, nine years after her divorce from Patrick. Loathing in Patrick’s eyes when he sees her.
Last lines: How could anybody hate Rose so much, at the very moment when she was ready to come forward with her good will, her smiling confession of exhaustion, her air of diffident faith in civilized overtures? Oh, Patrick could. Patrick could.